Wow! This was an awesome one-shot. And... it makes me sad... because I want to read more but when I go to click the 'next' button it's not there for me to click!

Anyway, well written and I think this could become a very excellent multi-chapter story!

aw! i cried. very well written, and a wonderful ending.

It was really sad, probably one of the saddest piece I have read on this site, I kind of want to know why Matthew was in prison for. Did he steal something? Was he framed for something he didn't do? What was it? But it was good as a oneshot, but I was looking forward to more chapters. It was definitely a great piece =)

I wanted to cry so bad. This was sad yet beautiful. I just want to hug Matty so much now. I would right a better response but I am still gushing over it.

aww that was so sad... really, I felt so so so so so sorry for Matty >__< and the hints about Matty being Al's brother were splendid *-*

...wow...

I cried at the end. That was absolutely amazing.

N-no-! D: You're telling me it is over?! D: Argh, sadnes. It was really awesome though, ohgod, poor Mattie. D:

Seriously though, good job. Gosh. D:

OMG this is amazing <3 i feel like i wanna cry!! poor mattie TT.TT <3

*sniffle* That was really sweet... *sad smile* I really liked the ending, it made me really happy-sad...That was really frickin' good! Loved it lots...

Ah ><; It's done... *sigh*

Was this just a oneshot or is it supposed to have more chapters? I guess considering it's marked complete it doesn't.

You did a very great job~ I was pretty captivated xD I didn't even notice the time pass.

It's a very good story-line as well... The characters aren't out of character, either. <3 <3 Awesome job.

Now I'll just have to cry about how I won't get any more x33

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aw!! that was so sweet i think I'm gonna cry TvT
it was beautiful and happy renunion! X3 so happyful...lol

AWE...TTWTT

THAT WAS TOO CUTE AND SWEET AND...DAW

This could be a very nice short, multi-chapter story and if I wasn't such a terrible writer, I would ask your permission to do just that.

It really was wonderful and oh poor, poor Matthew! :'[

I look forward to your other works.

Wow, that was amazing!

I absolutely loved it. Although, I wish it wasn't a one-shot. This sort of thing, definately has room to expand. I'm not saying it's a bad one-shot - it's not, one of the best I've ever read. But I think you could definately turn it into a multi-chapter if you wanted to. If it were me, I'd have done that, if only because I've always prefered multi-chapter stories to one-shots. It's just a personal preference of mine.

What I loved about this was that there is a lot of depth within the story. Although it wasn't necessarily explored, it was still good, and it screamed well-thought out. For example; the town. Who lives there, what sort of shops are there, what ways do the townpeople's entertain themselves.

Hehe, it took me a while, (as I'm sure was your intention) but I first thought that the "Master" was Arthur, or maybe Francis. I quickly ruled out Alfred though - what sort of Master goes and fetches his own pet? :P But, it wasn't until them mention of the portrait with the two twins on there that I started suspecting that the room was either Alfred's or Matthews. Because it wasn't until then, I was absolutely sure that Alfred was going to be acting as Alfred's brother (becuase in some fics I've read they aren't always related). So, that's why it took me a while to realise that when Bernard said "It's the master's room, of course", that he meant "it is YOUR room, Master Matthew."

At least I hope that was what he meant...and you.

You know, I half expected Matthew to kiss Alfred when he saved him the drunk guard. Please tell me you had to resist the urge to do that, because I would have xD Because it was that was before Matthew became enlightened as to what his status was in the household.

It's such a SHAME this was a one-shot, as much as I loved it, I want ot sit there and read MORE..!

I loved it! At this point I would normally add "update soon" but you CAN'T because it's a one-shot! *Cry*

I love it! So...so much...