lOVED THIS! What r u going 2 do next?
-C-Cloud ;)

<3 the story x10 keep writin update!

I said it before and ill say it again, you have to check for typos! Massie always comes out on top, she never walks out in her pjs. Massie's mother never made her breakfast! Intez did!

I have to say that you need to review for typos and check to make sure you are writing in the same tense. Before you write something like this you should first actually read the series you base it on. The girls can't be 16 and in 7th grade! Massie is supposed to be the alpha!

This is a really good story!
I loving it so far,
I think you should make Massie go with them, and she changes back into her old self, but then when she gets home Claire's all mad at her.
It's just a suggestion lol, you don't have to go with it or anything:)
But anyways amazing story! Keep writing!

Hey sera, you did better in this chapter, sometimes though you still use a little i instead of a capital I lol.
Keep it up

hi!
umm...just so you know, the "fond" your talking about is "fawn" right? chris abeley's ex girlfriend.
and you got the wrong spelling for alicia's name.. it's alicia not aleisha...okay??

Hey I jsut found your story and WOW
I loved it!
Please update soon your amazing

Hey seza, good start but you have many grammar and punctuation mistakes for example i should I, and instead using msn language use the real word eg OMG to oh my god etc.

Update soon, ane if you want email me your chapters before you put them up and I will do it for you like old times lol