could you make another chapter? wonder what kaiba 'il do? more please!

Owl

Wow this is a good chapter. Your a good writer and you can write it all in such a short chapter.
Come read my story... When evil strikes... I think you can help me!

Very realistic. (as far as anime goes) But I could see this unfold in my mind.
I can see Seto reacting in this manner also.

Whats wrong with anger management i was in anger management its fun!

big... cliff... hanger... and... it... ended... ARGH!

it ended before it even started! write some more, it's such a cliffhanger! and i don't think Seto needs anger management, i think the "truthfull beaver" does.

-Midiot

Hm. Nice, but I didn't see where anger management came in that's all.

Oh my god! Girl! What is wrong with you? I have seen bad stories before and I have seen offensive stories before but this story is so bad and offensive it is CRAPTACULAR! This is terrible! It’s like the stuff that is the last to ooze out of your *sandwich* and leave a stain on your *shirt*! It is so full with homophobia ! For instance: The king is supposed to like the gift? Why because its purple? Is this supposed to mean that... The king is GAY? And the stuff about believing in fairies? Plagiarism perhaps of Peter Pan? Or an even more diabolical homophobic reference to GAYS! And this is so mean to the less fortunate! Suck talk of extravagant homes! And all this about brushing away peasants! And I see you no longer are doing product endorsements! Does this mean you are getting your money from somewhere else? Dare I say... DRUGS! I do believe so! Only hallucinogens could produce such a bogus story! And this story is as much bogus as it is disgusting! What is with the talk of great priced gifts , marketed to passing men, that are in purple and women with blue eye shadow? Hmm? Tsk Tsk Tsk! Naughty! Naughty! This is soo horribly wrong you should be ashamed!

What! "End?" If this were billed as a humor fic whose point was that Kaiba believes in fairies (heehee!), I could understand that. But for a general fic, you can't end it there! Why doncha write more chapters and do something with that neato oracle, mm?

Good beginning! Keep going, i think this will turn out interesting...

*waves purple and black pom-poms* GOOOOOOOOOO KAIBA! _;;;;;; oops...sorry...

HI MEGAMI! HEE HEE! SUGER HIGH! WOO! la la la! I like the story even tho I aready kinda read the comic, but thasok! HEE HEE, write more an I'm gonna try an write my DBZ ficcie...repeat, gonna try...thad be good ne? yah...neway... yah... BAI BAI!

Suppi: lol! You are Kaiba that believes in fairies!

Kaiba:...

Malik: *points at Kaiba* AHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Suppi: And, you are Malik that's afraid of his big sister!

Kaiba: *points at Malik* AHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Malik: The bunnies Kaiba! The bunnies!

Kaiba: AAAHHHHHH!

Suppi: *sweatdrop*

Lol - AAHHAHAHAHHA! THE BUNNIES KAIBA, THE BUNNIES!

Seto: GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

AHAHAHAHAHAHA! Write more :D