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   ulfffshofia 5/25/13 . chapter 13continue the story please... oh, and, more Atsuki's POV? *sorry for the bad grammar* |
| Dlbn 4/30/13 . chapter 13 Welcome back! Aw poor Yayoi, having to see that. Dai's right. FORT doesn't really care what the agents want, do they? And about time you did that, Dai. Hehe Can't wait to read more! _ Dlbn |
| Alatum Laminis 4/27/13 . chapter 13 I don't trust Dai one bit. The suspicion and suspense are both killing me. What are you up to? On a side note, did you enjoy Guatemala? |
| kamishiro lol 2/9/13 . chapter 12 continue, please? i'm a reader from Asia, and i like it! pleaseee continue, i beg you! |
| Alatum Laminis 2/4/13 . chapter 12 Oh, yeah. I'm guessing. Still wondering what you're up to. |
| Alatum Laminis 12/2/12 . chapter 11 What are you up to, little author? What kind of plot do you hope to accomplish? For the life of me, I can't figure it out, and that almost never happens! How absolutely intriguing! I look forward to your next update! |
| Alatum Laminis 10/23/12 . chapter 10 I feel suspicious about Dai. |
| Alex 1/10/12 . chapter 9 alright now that was a great chapther im still confussed who Dia is but it's ok...i love this chapther can't whait for the next one srry about my spelling mistakes |
| Alatum Laminis 12/9/11 . chapter 9 Excellent. I'm honored that you dedicated this chapter to me. You are, after all, my senior in both age and fanfiction writing experience. I tip my hat to you. |
| Alexcullencool 8/20/11 . chapter 8 make another chapter yur so good at wrting sorties please make chapther8 |
| Alatum Laminis 8/19/11 . chapter 8 Imagine a 5'9" tall, 14-year-old boy on his knees, begging you to update this fanfiction. That's me. PLEEEEEASE! I'M BEGGING YOU! UPDATE! PLEEEASE! THIS FANFICTION IS AWESOME! AND IT HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL! WE NEED MORE FANFICTIONS ON THIS ARCHIVE THAT INVOLVES A HETEROSEXUAL PAIRING! Okay, that went against all my codes of honor, and I swallowed my pride to beg you like this. My pride is one of the few things in this world that I hold dear, and I just pushed it aside just to ask you to update. And just so you know, I'm possibly just as crazy/insane as you are, and if not, even more insane. So I'm swallowing my shame and my pride...and I'm begging you, pleading with you...on my goddamn knees...please update. And if you can't or won't, tell me why. |
| alex 3/28/11 . chapter 1 when you going to make it! i can't wait any hurry!it's so good |
| alex 3/27/11 . chapter 8 I can't wait till you make the 9th ,hurry and make it i can't any should keep wruthing really good at it. - |
| alex 12/22/10 . chapter 8 I like this chapter. you should make chapter eight and keep on writing never stop. for chapter eight put A NEW LIFE |
| whitedove135 7/2/10 . chapter 5 Wow! Such a scary scene! - I like the detail you put into Yayoi's rage. :D I love your writing style! It's detailed, but still short and easy to read. - And I love Lux-Pain! I still play it (my third playing through). They should make an anime for it, seriously! But Fanfiction is just as good. :D I'll keep reading your story! :D It's so good. - |
