the last scene is quite interesting...

yuki as spy...

and i think, since yuki and jiro are nada here, i hope a rui/yuki/akira would compensate...

please, please, please...?

and i hope you update soon! :]

awesome job! Great story. see,in "Boys over FLowers" Ga Eul(Yuki) and Yi Jeong(Sijiro)Actually get along,become friends,and eventually kiss and sorta date. :) its kinda odd watching that first THEN seeing Hana yori dango.

back to what i was saying:THIS STORY ROCKS!

3 love akira! Update soon!

I'm liking this story a lot so far! You do a good job of giving us a lot of great details about Akira's home life and Yuki's personality. I also like how all of the characters have matured, especially Yuki. And it seems like there's the beginning of a romantic triangle forming here too, as well as some good underworld plot. All in all, great beginning! Keep writing!

I really like this story ALOT! Please update soon! :D

Hey there. just wanted to bring to your attention that you re-posted the first chapter as the second. I am interested to see where you can take this story. I think you have an interesting start.