yeah. that was short and HOT. haha.. more welkin and alicia please! oh btw, i want the update for refraction too! i love that great fic! i hope you make more! :D

Heh... you have such an upbeat humorous atmosphere in these oneshots you write. Of course I'm some romanticist, and love this kind of stuff. Your stories just put a stupid looking grin on my face. It's so funny to see how innocent characters like Welkin and Alicia can be put through such situations. Nice.

~Mr. Wang

It looks like you specialize in romance, which I'll straight up admit is not my thing. Even though I really don't like romance though I do like your stories. I've read all of your one-shots (Haven't looked through Refraction yet -- probably should) and though for some reason I never reviewed them they've all been quite enjoyable as little light pick-me-ups. There's no lack of cuteness to them, and I like your first person style.

One comment though -- It's first person, but try not to start as many sentences with "I..." At a couple of points it was "I this" and "I that". Try to find a way to vary that a bit. Saying "I..." isn't always bad (and in first person it's often necessary), but you shouldn't use it all the time.

Pretty good job though. I looked through your upcoming ideas in your profile, and they both sound pretty interesting (Especially the Bruel one). Keep it up. I'll make sure I actually hit the review button from now on.

This one was funny. It's amazing to see how a little sexual tension can make great comedy. You seem to specialize in it, so I hope to see a little more.