 watermelonsmilesss 2009-11-17 . chapter 1Awh see this is cute (:
My pure and innocent mind can handle this...
... Okay maybe it's not pure. Or innocent.
Idk if you've checked out South Park slash, but it has a HUGE fanbase. You should get into it, seriously. I never thought I would but it's kind of addicting (:
But anywho, this is adorable! |
 London Romance 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Awh, that was a short and sweet way to showcase Edd and Eddy. Everyone knows that eddy would never show compassion or any caring at all towards another human being, but you really pulled it off. Great job! :D |
 Taisi 2009-11-03 . chapter 1Aw! Very cute! I love Eddy. xD Never a dull moment with him. Double D cracks me up, and Ed's so...Ed. |
 Akito Souma 2009-10-29 . chapter 1Aw! That was so sweet, so darling! And I actually blushed when Eddy said that he and Ed would take care of Double D. It was like I could feel the awkwardness, randomness, and yet unbelievable sweetness of the moment.
This wasn't just a good fic... it was a perfect one!
And I loved it. :D |
 Nintendo Nut1 2009-10-29 . chapter 1Precious. Absolutely precious. As usual.
Welcome back! I've always loved your work. ^^
~NN1 |
 darthelwig 2009-10-28 . chapter 1That was sweet (pun totally intended, lol). But why is your Double D always so damn morose?? You really cannot write a story without a bit of angst in it, can you? lol |
 ChibiMizu 2009-10-27 . chapter 1OMFG. So cute!! I like the "slash-squintness". :3 Well written and full of "THIS PART WILL MAKE YOU SMILE AT YOUR COMPUTER" bits. And not to OOC. So... good job! XD |
 Yoshermon 2009-10-26 . chapter 1As far as one-shots go, this one is pretty nice! Your spelling and grammar are perfect, your story writing is detailed and interesting and your story was short but sweet.
The only thing I didn't really like was that it seemed almost like yaoi with Edd holding Eddy's hand. I don't know if you wanted to imply them being homosexual or if you meant it just to be a friendly gesture, but other than that the story is one of the nicest one-shots I've ever read! |
 poxmaker 2009-10-25 . chapter 1Aww, that was so sweet. And they were so in character--even an act that would normally seem un-Eddy-like was done in a very Eddy way. You're really good at writing these guys.
A lovely little read. ^^ |