Wow you did great.w changing things but keeping it true to the story. Are you plabing on finishing this?

I can't wait to know what happened while the honey moon was going on with alice and Jasper.

I read (or possibly re-read) whitout realizing that you haven't continued it. I am in mourning. I loved Prelude and I loved this. It is mature, serious, interesting. You have started so many threads, so many possibilities that stay unresoved. I know that you have written other stories, but unfortunately AHs do not interest me. There is really no hope that you will take it up again?

This was a great story, as well as The Prologue...is there a sequel to this one?

I hope you finish synod soon I'm totally hooked

I've read Prelude and the Necklace.. and just now getting to this story. I really enjoy your writing. Your ability to weave stories is wonderful. You bring something to the page that makes it difficult to stop reading...

Found this on your profile page after finishing "There is a Light" ( which is one of the handful of my very favorites now, by the way). I truly hope you decide to continue this. I'm loving your take on canon. Also, while I understand that you may feel like you're in a different place now, it may be interesting to bring that to this story. We are all certainly changed by our experiences, but also profoundly by what we create. I would love to see the new insights, feelings, and dirction you would now bring to this story, or anything you write, for that matter.

Thank you, either way. This was a joy to read.

Hi I've just read this and prelude and just wanted to say how enjoyable they both are.

I saw this was on hiatus but really hope you feel able to continue and finish one day.

I'm so happy that I read this, even though it's not finished. This is exactly how their honeymoon should have been. I REALLY hope that you will pick this story up in the very near future. Are you planning on it?

I love that these two have become a beautiful real couple.

It's sad that she's not pregnant because they both really wanted it:(

Perfect!

So, so good! Exactly what Breaking Dawn should have been.

I really want to read this although I can see that you haven't completed it or updated it in a while. Will you be updating soon?

So sorry to see this on hiatus. Have to say that the last few chapters-from where thru figure it out through their return to Forks-are some of the most beautiful passages I have read in a long time. Can't wait for the rest!

Well, I'm very conflicted, I don't know how I feel about a pregnancy. I really would love for Edward to have a child, he did seem filled with longing when talking to Bella about it. But then, if she gets pregnant, here comes all the drama, pain and suffering for Edward. I guess it's fairly clear who I favor, can't help it, I love that boy!