Great Chapter ^^ Poor James. Spineless boy. XD Great battle. I wonder how will Ash and Co get back to the Pokemon World and rescue Umi and Fuu?

Keep it up ^^

Great Chapter ^^ Yay Ash and Hikaru made up ^^ LOL. Poor Jessie. She got electrocuted by Pikachu XD

update soon.

Well, let's hope it gets better for everyone later on.

Great Chapter ^^ it was a little awkward to read Ash having a dream about possessive Jessie tries to kiss him. Ash is indeed a fast learner XD I hope Ash and Hikaru can patch things up ^^

update soon ^^

Wonder if the Rune Gods could combine their powers to trigger Ash's inner powers?
And, is it wrong to use the powers of darkness for good, selfless ends.

It's getting even more interesting for each chapter, huh?

The story is good.
Keep it up with this one.

As for the TMNT video game parody story, I did know what kind of girl Haruno-chan was like, while I didn't know about Asuka from NGE.
So, in other words, I'm not gonna review that one, but I can try to get people to review it.

BTW, when you asked me if you should replace Saito with Ash, then I say forget it.
It would be better, if Ash, along with Pikachu, and his other current Pokémon, as well as maybe either Fantina, Angie, or Anabel, or maybe all of them, ended up in the "Realm of Summoning," by the cause of Dialga, before they end up at the Magic Academy of Tristain.
Saito did have a laptop in the anime, which he was carrying on, before he ended up getting pulled through the portal that brought him into the "Realm of Summoning," causing him to drop the computer.
Maybe, you could let him have it with him in that story.
And, when it comes to how the Pokémon characters ends up at the academy, well you could either let the story take place after shortly after season 3, or you could let Negi and some girls of the girls from Negima enter the portal, which they opened with their magical powers, when they picked up its unidentified source of magic, at the same spot as Saito where, when he ended up in the realm, causing Negi to use his powers to try to activate the seal on the floor of the realm, sending them to the academy, there Fantina could teach the students about Pokémon, with her, Ash, Angie, and Anabel having Pokémon Battles, while Negi could become teacher within the Magic System of Pactio.

i sense the return of Ash's dark god form from the mutlicross story, should be intresting to see how things go from here.

I smell love coming through the surface, if you know what mean don't you?

Great Chapter. Lucky Ash. He always get hit on by girls XD.

Primera is so evil. Even with her plans was foiled thanks to Pikachu and Meowth, it seems it was able to bring Ash and Hikaru together.

LOL. It was funny to see James carrying around with him a condom then gave it to Ash XD Also it was funny when Ash thought Hikaru was a lesbian XD

Keep up with the good work. ^^

Great Chapter. The bath scene was funny XD Of course Ash and Jessie are complete opposite. thats why their cominbations doesnt work too well.

please update soon...

The way on how Ash and Jessie weren't mixing well is because those two are like oil and vinegar if you know what I mean that is.

good chapter.

Great Chapter. What great power does Ash have within him? Is it his Dark Aura or something if Clef is so worried about it?

Uh Oh, Primera is up to no good.

Cant wait 4 the next chapter XD update soon...

HAPPY HALLOWEEN ^_^ Great Chapter. I like the fun moment between Ash and Hikaru.

I like the part when Jessie say to James 'Gee, you think, Dorothy?' LOL I was surprised Jessie even knows the Wizard of Oz thing XD

Anyways, update soon...

Well, I wonder if Ash can find a way, to become a Magic Knight, or at least find some special training for the Pokémon, so that they can get themselves infused with magic, which they could adapt for their Moves.