very funny , i loved how she got distracted by something shiny , it sounds excatly how you think she would act . is this a one shot or are you going to continue it.

That was great! You had Nathan very in character for a humor fic, and I can totally see Amber doing something like this at 16. hehe

"And with that, she dropped and scampered back to her room, leaving Nathan wondering just what the hell Amber was going to do to him in a couple years." - Hands down, favorite bit of the fic! lol It's hilarious, but so serious at the same time, I can see Nathan thinking something like this. xD

I loved it. :D

"Thankfully, something sparkly walked past." *giggle snort*