Fantastic! You manage to pack a lot of intensity into a few short sentences.

An excellent piece. I like the use of short sentences and the continual use of first person pronouns. I also like the order in which he thinks about "Caroline. My son. And Gina.". A powerful piece and a fine addition to the MV section of . Well done.

Voilà la review ! J'espère que ça marchera...

Wonderful! look forward as usual to reading more as again w/ detail it is as if I am you. Regards The Sheriff.

I've never watched MV, as you know, but I wanted to read this because you wrote it. You convey feeling so well with your writing, and this little drabble is powerful and beautiful!