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Reviews for: If You Were Mine
ChrisBreezyx3 6/12/11 . chapter 1
This was sad. :( Poor Randy...I love it though! :D
FaithIsTakingTheFirstStep 3/21/11 . chapter 1
this story was sad but beautiful at the same time.

great job. :)
WalkingOnnSunshinee 2/3/11 . chapter 1
this is so cute:)
xlightafire 12/8/10 . chapter 1
This... made me cry! Poor Randy. :( I think we've all been in the situation once in our lives, and felt the exact same way he does. Truly a wonderful story.

You are being too hard on yourself! This was wonderfully put together! :)
TJ Sparkles 10/29/09 . chapter 1
Aw, why don't you like this? I thought it was bittersweet. It was nice to see Randy caring so much about another person, than himself. I really enjoyed the way you wrote him. I just wanted to reach through my computer screen and give the poor guy a hug. Being lovesick's no fun at all.

Evan & Kelly's a cute couple! I don't know why but they just are, LOL.

You really surprised me with the ending. I didn't expect it to be a daydream, and I got all sad for Randy again. Aw :( I thought the story was VERY WELL developed, and flowed so naturally. You should be proud of it, Christal.

Love it sis!

Tina
momijisan89 10/26/09 . chapter 1
AW

don't trip Christal!

This fic was super awesome and cute!

I'm so favoriting this so I can re-read it...but I'm sad that it was just a dream XD
Kylie 10/26/09 . chapter 1
Aw! I love it Christal! It was amazing :)

That was sad... poor Randy :(
xo.dreams 10/26/09 . chapter 1
I LOVED this one shot ! I was caught up in the whole scenario with Kelly and Randy. But then Evan had to talk. -_- Oh wells. Once again, I loved this one shot!
xbeautifulnightmare 10/26/09 . chapter 1
I loved it Christal!

It was so adorable and sweet, and so well written!

You're such a good writer! _

:o Kelly - Evan is my man! LMAO. XD

Once again, I adore it girly! Such a amazing fic! :D

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