This was very good. There is absolutely nothing wrong with this except it isn't longer. I wish it was longer. I can't wait to read more of your story. I really loved it!
Person Of A Strange Origin

It's really no romance in here! But a good friendship shot nonetheless. Thanks for writing this.

Keep writing! XD

WONDERFUL! I loved this oneshot--makes me feel giddy with hope :)

^_^ i love it! already i can tell this will be one of my favorites!