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fallen sicilian angel
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Really good, it made me smile a the end. Is there going to be more. if so please update soon. you could definately make a story out of this.
JDPhoenix
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
Ah, Gambit, he so deserved to be in the first three movies. But this story makes up for that. It's so fun to see him and Rogue interacting in this universe. And I love that he's not all freaked out that she knows Logan, just, "oh yeah, that guy, good times," since I'm sure he's had other adventures since then.

Speaking of other adventures, I am seriously begging you to write more of this. I know it says "complete" at the top of the screen -- and I do have a strict policy to never request more when it says that -- but we both know you love this ship and are just as sad as I am that they never happened in the films. (Really, that was all I wanted from the movies and they couldn't even give me that.)

Back to the story at hand: Rogue post-Bobby is awesome. I'm not saying I entirely approve of her life choices, but I understand them and it's nice to see that even though she gave up her powers, she's gained some backbone as a result.

Awesome job with this. Even if you don't write any more for this couple, this was totally enjoyable.
courtneykutie
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
I liked it!
Very good!
faerietaleredux
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
I'll be honest. I hated Last Stand. As in, I really really hated it. It seemed to ruin everything I loved about the first two movies (and the x-men concept in general)--the subtlety was gone, the character complexity. All replaced with a lot of flash and bang. Rogue choosing to sacrifice her power for a boy who wasn't even completely loyal to her? Made my blood boil. But then, she's always been my favorite and I hold her to a higher standard.

Anyway, I like that your fic acknowledges the scenario from the last movie, but moves past it.

'He smirked and quirked an eyebrow at her, “Maybe.”
She grinned, “Anything to eat or drink, I mean.”'-HAHA. Love that one.

And your Gambit is much cooler than Wolverine movie Gambit. He reminds me of the one from the FOX cartoon. Love him. Sexiest cartoon ever, lol. Even though it feels wrong saying so, haha.
Capt_Mackenzie
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
Hmph. This could go either way, I think ... fantastic, or a mess. Just be careful in the execution! For instance, toward the end, the dialogue b/w Rems & Rogue got a little awkward. Specifically, the lines from “Why are you whispering?” to “Good. So no boyfriend?” That spot seemed rushed and ill-considered, to the point of being OOC.

Why do I say that? Considering what went down on 3-mile island, and Remy's severe aversion to ever going back there when Wolvie asked him to fly there, he wouldn't be all, "Uh...what's up with you, girl, being all secretive & wierd about me knowing this guy?" I think Remy would be whispering, too, and wary, and maybe even a tad suspicious. After all, how long has it been since he contacted Logan? And isn't it a strange coincidence to suddenly meet someone else who knows Logan so well, after hearing nothing for so long? Having grown up half on the streets and half in a well-organized crime ring, it would seem natural to Remy to be hyper-suspicious about a lot of things. So, yeah, it's in character for him to flirt with a woman like Marie, but he wouldn't just gloss over their mutual connection w/Wolverine. Remy's instincts are honed to a fine edge; he would recognize a potentially dangerous woman when he met one, and would respond accordingly. Not that I think Remy would make a scene @ the diner, but neither would he remain so free & easy.
moonfan2012
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
you should continue this story! i think it would be awesome if you did.
Dragongirl of the Stars
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
I like dis lots! And third person... Heh. Nice. Always cute to see people throw that in. Not everybody remembers. ;)

More soon?
-Dots
JuseaPeterson
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
One of the things that bothered me in the first three X-Men movies was that there was no Gambit, and Rogue wasn't quite the character that I knew from the cartoon and comic. But I really like how you moved the Rogue you see in the movies to this one here. And I love how you were able to use the movies and bring Gambit and Rogue together, very well done. Completely loved it.

I think you captured Gambit and Rogue very well and I loved their exchange. Great job.
tasha
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
like most people i like romy stuff not soddy bobby sounds really good so far cant wait to read more! ;)
water raven
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
that was the cutest thibg i've ever read
yey rogue not with iceprick
yey remy's here
yey they are talkin'/flirtin' to each other
do another one plz plz plz
what is the good review limit
hope 2 read more
gambitfan85
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
A story this intriguing shouldn't stop now. I hope there's more in the future. Until then, keep up the great work.
RomyLover
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
I always love me some Romy. ^_^ Hope u write another chapter. Plz.
inuyasha's tennyo
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
cute, will there be a sequel? that might be nice.
AshmandaLC
2009-10-26 . chapter 1
:D this was awesome! very amusing look at these two. were you planning on continuing this at all, or was this it?

again, very amsuing. much flirataion between them as there should be. :)
Laceylou76
2009-10-26 . chapter 1
Oh a floozy Rogue! This should be interesting! lol I really like it! Too bad it's a one-shot! Hopefully one day it'll be more, non?! :D
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