lol. That's awesome! Love this! Cool peek at the script! Rock on!

Wow! This is very good. I don't know much about movie scripts, but surely you had to have written a lot of this in yourself, right? You've done an excellent job! Is this the end of it, or were you ever planning to add more? Just wondering how the time travelling would wind up in all this.

They really altered the Doc's character a LOT before the done deal, didn't they? Right down to the nickname, too! I like the cops showing up and Marty almost getting into trouble with the law, with the "Pro" having to come in and save his butt. Great teamwork. *biggrin*

Thanks for posting!

Rin

This is a great story! :)

I think you should write more for this universe. Even if Marty is a little more wild - and Doc, I mean Pro, a little more uptight.