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apricot817 10/17/10 . chapter 2
Good story
apricot817 10/13/10 . chapter 1
Wow. Very good. I'm glad I found this story.
babbles 8/20/10 . chapter 7
I loved this line...

She was so beautifully mean, and she was going to be in so much trouble.

LMAO To be honest, I would have wrapped the rascal in duct tape if it had meant I'd once again get to feel her around me

Hahaha, i loved the condom wrapper stuck to him...
babbles 8/20/10 . chapter 6
Awwwwwwww...Edward walked me around to the passenger side of his car. Not letting go of my hand until the last possible second and narrowly avoiding trapping his arm in the door as he closed it behind me.

The whole was way sweet... And the kiss was perfect...
babbles 8/20/10 . chapter 5
A dream... WTF!

Evil!

LOL Eddie Jr. had felt betrayed.

Oh I'm glad they can at least FB each other, a week was too long with no contact... And Ugh, i almost forgot he was with Rosalie... blah you FF rule breaker...
babbles 8/20/10 . chapter 4
LMAO ur Alice...

"I just wanted to get home before you left. You know me, I felt the need to check out your outfit"

&

"Erm, Bella… you already slept with the guy, numerous times in one day, the same day you met him… he may already have that impression."

And been there done this... He closed his eyes as if in prayer as he turned the key in the ignition.

And Kat, can you really feel "moisture gather between my thighs"... I'm not sure i experience this myself... I mean logically i know what occurs when aroused but actually swamping of the area doesn't happen for yours truly but then again, i don't exactly have The Pretty in front of me either...
ellierk 7/8/10 . chapter 7
Bwaaaahahahahaha!

Was the stuck foil story taken from real life?

Nice reunion, britkat! (hot as hell...)

MUAH!
KRYork 7/5/10 . chapter 7
Awe a Bella blankie! I have missed you and your fun E & B hope your doing well, by the way you can't just throw out stingray insident 2010 and not tell us what happened...lol

Take care!

K
Babe Pryor 7/5/10 . chapter 7
My alerts aren't working..I found this was updated, I really, enjoyed it..I feel Jake will show himself soon, putting Bella in an embarrassing predicament..What will Edward think? Also, he has a past too..will something or someone come out of his past as well? xx
coxie 7/4/10 . chapter 7
) I loved that bit at then end with the condom packet stuck to his ass.. lolol
QuitetheKerfuffle 7/4/10 . chapter 7
Hey, a girl has to protect her knees! I'm like Lindi, I am going to have a hard time looking you in the eye the next time I see you ;)

Xoxo
OlYMPICOVEN 7/3/10 . chapter 7
hahaha :)
OlYMPICOVEN 6/28/10 . chapter 6
:O lol. great story. update ASAP
PiperBlue 6/3/10 . chapter 6
Wow, this has been really good! I've definately enjoyed the story so far. I hope you are gonna keep going! : ) But if not, great job!
shorty1773 6/3/10 . chapter 6
I'm loving this story! It's great! Please update soon! I'm looking forward to more! Great writing!
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