aww, this story was so cute. i personally like long stories cuz short stories, are well . . . short lol. short stories to me, dont have enough time to develop. well unless the short story takes like an hour or more to read, then maybe it cant count. anyways great job on this one too!

Beautiful! I loved it! Simple but great! I liked the format you wrote, it's somewhat poetic! Excellent work!

good fic

so sweet. :)

Cute! Kenshin is so lovesick I just want to pinch his cheeks.

- LG

So cute! I really liked and enjoyed reading this.

wishes and dreams- the good ones, if they'd only come true...

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