I just read this whole piece in one go and I have to say you have a lovely command of language and character. Since the beginning Alice and Jazz have been the only Twilight pair to ever captivate my full attention, and this fic is doing quite the job of captivating. The background work you've done with James is particularly spectacular, it really makes him all the more despicable. You stirred a nice bit of loathing out of me, and I have to applaud any writing to raise that strong of a reaction from someone. Really wonderful job. I'm definitely waiting for the rest!

How do I keep falling behind? Amazing chapter! Gotta go read more.

Excellent chapter. I hope Alice will stay and help them fight James if he does show up. Please update soon.

Absolutely fantastic chapter! Update again soon!

Excellent chapter. I hope something will happen to make her stay with them. Please update soon.

Excellent chapter!

Excellent chapter. Love the meeting of Alice and Jasper. I wish there was a way for her to join them and leave James. Please update soon.

Wow - two fantastic chapters back to back! Update soon, please!

Wow.

Excellent chapter. I hope Alice will one day leave James. Please update soon.

That chapter was AWESOME! Update soon!

Excellent chapter. Please update soon.

I like it!

Don't normally read fics that are less than a thousand words a chapter, but I'm glad I read this :) Your style is really captivating and I love your descriptions. Can't wait for more.

Wow... Amazing start! Please update soon!