| Reviews for The Beautiful Enemy |
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merlyn1382 12/22/09 . chapter 6the story is perfect i can't wait to see what the plan is and how team 7 is going to react to it |
WhiteDemoness11 12/19/09 . chapter 6Well you get my first review back from Hiatus. I've been enjoying this story, but I really really adored this chapter. I like that Kagome makes mistakes, that she's trying to figure herself and her new home out, that she isn't all powerful and all knowing. Instead she's got a LOT on her hands and follows how she seems to react with her miko abilities in the manga. A lot of heart and not a lot of clues on how to do things but capable. Seriously though the scene with Itachi made me grin. First off it was very well done, secondly it's more telling to me that he didn't knock Kagome unconscious for hollering she was alive when right by his ear then his words. Please do update again. |
LuLuCrazeD 12/19/09 . chapter 6lmao... kagome is so hilarious! woah itachi really angry.. that's rare and very interesting it's a shame that kagome just lost everyone's trust again though that was an amazingly written out scene xD a few grammar errors but not many so that's alright. just might wanna check over ur chapters an extra time to fix the few mistakes or get a beta if that is easier great job btw, hope u can update again soon |
Shiori Mayonaka no Yume 12/18/09 . chapter 6damn, tsunade is a tyrant! XD update soon, that was funny too! XD |
darksilvercloud 12/18/09 . chapter 6the story's still good ) |
Sugar0o 12/18/09 . chapter 6:3i luff you! and this story! i wonder and hope that there's an Itachi/Kagome romance pairing, and if not maybe a Kakashi/Kagome pairing _ i'd like that. |
jesswolf22 12/14/09 . chapter 5i love this storie |
MidWinterBabe 12/9/09 . chapter 5TTTT How could you! please update soon! I Really like this story UPDATE SOON! |
tinabug 11/30/09 . chapter 5I love this story. Its moving along nicely. I hope Kagome can travel with the group now. Can't wait to see how it works itself out with Itachi/Kagome/Sasuke. |
BeeBee's girl 11/28/09 . chapter 5very good update soon |
Cherry989 11/28/09 . chapter 5This is good. |
fluffymctaco 11/27/09 . chapter 5LOVED IT! |
Jessica is love 11/25/09 . chapter 5this is really good:) please update! |
Emerald Time 11/22/09 . chapter 5I THINK THIS STORY IS AWESOME! UPDATE SOON! |
angel19872006 11/21/09 . chapter 5please update |