This was really great. You did a good job writing as Naomi. Not like an adult, but not babyish. I hadn't even thought about Naomi being on Quarra. Really interesting story.

Yes! Your story rocks my world! *Finally* a story from Naomi's point of view that shows how smart she is and doesn't have her talking baby-talk... I really liked your take on Quarra, too! Seriously, this is just perfect and awesome. You rock!

Awww. A Naomi story. That was cute.