aww poor Greg! Hope his parents don't blame him since it wasn't his fault! UPDATE SOON!

Cute story. In one chapter you have Catherine married to Warrick and in the last chapter she's married to Grissom. That was a little confusing.

Cassie calling Greg "mother" confused me a couple of times LOL. The first time I saw "her mother" I was like "huh?" Until I realized "oh yeah, that's Greg". There are different names that you can use for two fathers. "dad and daddy", "dad and papa/pop", etc. Or you could have Cassie call Greg the Norwegian word for father since Greg is Norwegian. :)

Cute story though. I do like that you gave Greg a sibling in this fic cause on the show he's an only child.

When Greg said Adam's own partner killed him, I thought he meant life partner until Cath mentioned the husband, then I realized it was CSI/cop partner. I did wonder if the shooting was a "friendly fire" incident (like Brass accidently killing that officer one time while trying to shoot a suspect) or if it was murder.

I definatly liked this other update as well...though poor Greg is going through so much more again! Oh...by the way...in the last chapter you had Catherine's last name as Brown and in this chapter shes married to Grissom...so that was just a little confusing...though I can't wait to read more of this!

not bad chapter:)
but i am a bit confused, about everything:/, would like more background, the how and why, i mean greg`s background etc, and grissom and cathrine marriage, more explanations etc.

Definatly liked the update...I can't wait to read more of this...its really interesting!

nice:)
please update soon:)
didnt you have a another mpreg story, with greg is 6 months on the way, and has been through another explosion at the morgue? ore am i wrong about that?
keep on writing:)

i love it.

This is so cute!! Can't wait for more!

i love it so far. i hope he doesnt loose teh babies if he get's kidnapped.

More please :)

This definatly looks like its going to be a good story and I can't wait to read more of this!

Great Job. Its great that you brought Cassie back in this story.

Aww...poor Greg! But i do have a feeling though that Cassie and/or Cathrin will be the ones to FINALLy get the guys together. Just hope things work out and Daninal doesn't try to come back into the picture!! UPDATE SOON!!

interssting, I feel really bad for Greg and I hope that Nick will kiss it better :) update soon :D

You need to put up a disclaimer and maybe a warning for those who don't like reading m-preg.