An intriguing and enjoyable opening.

interesting idea. i actually hope after reading this and the omakes today that you will continue your stories after unending to destiny.

Good story, you should continue it.

You may say it sucked but I liked it and do hope that you do more either with this or start something new that goes along the same lines. I thank you in advance and look forward to seeing what comes.



Hemotem

this plot bunny has promise.
even if its got rabbies ..



thanks !

I liked!! Great story!

interesting plot bunny, byes

Great story! Please continue

really like the story. Good plot, I like it. Yay.

Might be a bunny, but I would love to see this extended.

This is amazing, Please continue this!

brilliant

i like this! ^-^ update soon!

oh this had started so WELL also and then you just had to bring in people who were wizards/witches or "in the know"

Would have been better if you'd just had Harry acting like some phantom for quite a while both not trusting the new guys and MAYBE helping them if they need it- the NOT TRUSTING part is quite common amoung people who are alone for years they don't quite believe it and are TERRIFIED. It takes them some time to get used to it and considering Harry has magic well... its not like they could catching him, he'd be the ship's ghost for some time until the truth would really be brought to light.

It's too bad that this is a one shot. Thanks for writing.