wow, this story blew my mind :)

perfectly written with a great view of lisbon's feelings!

thanks for sharing ;)

holly cow. Not the direction I was expecting this story to take, but take it it did. WOW! very well done. I loved it.

Good story, well done! And I think this story really explains why I dont think that Jane and Lisbon will get togheter, He can only lose as long as Red John is out to get him...

Very sad! Thanks!

i like how you passed on his feeling of revenge to another character, its a good idea (:

beautiful fic! I've got tears in my eyes, but in a weird, good way. loved it :)

sad...

Excellent story, and I didn't see it coming. Wow, so tragic, in so many ways. And RJ hasn't lost a nemesis, just changed them, though I wonder if he realizes that.

This is absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for the dedication. I was almost in tears by the end of this one...gah so tragic! Although I really like that she knows how he feels now and she's out for revenge.

I so didn't want this one to end. It was so good!

Ugh, that stinks. Red John's a bad word. I really liked this, and the way you wrote it. If you ever continue it I'd be the first to throw a party. Haha. :D

Elodie

This was so amazing! Not many things can make me cry, but this did, very powerful and just a wonderful story! Great job!

Wow. This is so impressive - beautiful, powerful, emotional...the ending was so tragic but so clever - Lisbon understanding and beginning the quest for revenge, mirroring Jane's feelings. Just perfect!

Wow...very powerful. Good job

Now that was a rollercoaster of emotions you put me through, Penny! First the sweet memories of how it all started, the happy days and then the heartbreaking tragedy. Very powerful story, well-written. Really really good!

Holy Crap, Penny! That was awesome! I loved how you used the prompt and the memories, and that was such a nice twist at the end. The last sentence was definitely my favorite. It had a lot of power. Really really good job with this one! It was very well-written and I didn't want it to end. Thanks for the dedication too! YAY. This totally made my day! AWESOME!