 IRobbedRobin 2009-11-25 . chapter 1This was very interesting to read! I don't like reading smut (I usually skipped over it) but, wow. I was intrigued by the metaphor(s) (...right? Is that what you call those? Or innuedos? LOL D:). I liked how it was short and sweet.
I've been playing cello for a while now, so from a musically inclined person you get a thumbs up on term knowledge. More than a regular person would know. <3 One small critique: When you wrote,"..as the other inadvertently plucked at catgut cords." Did you mean the strings on Ciel's "violin" or chords as in...three notes played at one time? And maybe the usage of trill, since after that you say he choked on a three-note cry. But I think that's me being confused.
A little tidbit of information that I want to share because I'm a boobie and obnoxious as well: Catgut strings are not really made of cat gut. They are made of goat, I believe. Story goes that a man hated a musician and started to spread gossip that the musician shot cats with some kind of bow and arrow and gutted the cat to make his strings.
Sorry for digressing (I haven't seen a fanfic in Kuroshitsuji that had any kind of music in it so I was all excited.) You did a wonderful job and I apologize for having such a long review. 8D;; |
 CrazyNerd14 2009-11-19 . chapter 1Hahaha!! Hilarious and excellent!! |
 Ravenous Lust 2009-11-16 . chapter 1Yay for innapropriate uses? Yay for innapropriate uses!
I...LOVE YOU FOR THIS. |
 Cannibal China-chan 2009-11-12 . chapter 1Well, i can't say it was unexpected. But I absolutely LOVE how you turned something SO LITTLE into THIS. 8D -Totally signing up for violin- > __> |
 kibafangirl11 2009-11-01 . chapter 1...and it's here where the imagination comes in handy XD
ahh, i can never play violin in the same way again! XD not that i've palyed it in the past 4 years or so~ |
 GoodbyeMyHeart 2009-10-28 . chapter 1That?
That was insanely, inexplicably sexy.
Holy. Crap.
There is a reason you are my favorite FF author.
Words cannot express how much I love this. |
 Ifern 2009-10-28 . chapter 1A well-learned lesson, oh!so pleasurable for the young Lord.
And a good laugh for us readers.
Thank you for this delicious interlude. ^^ |
 blueray 2009-10-27 . chapter 1Oh dear god...I'm never gonna be able to look at a violin without sniggering now.. XD
Loved it. Hilarious! |
 mochiusagi 2009-10-27 . chapter 1I think they were doing something naughty. I mean the language just implies it. |
 salom-soul 2009-10-27 . chapter 1i can only imagine what the lesson consisted of...
tehe, i liked it~!
<3 |