This was heartbreaking but in your usual way you handled it delicately and with such emotion.

Reading your more mature, sensitive Tony is a pleasure and you do such a great job of keeping the characters in canon.

Loved it! Perfect.

I'm crying right now. It was beautiful, sad, amazing but you made the ending happy enough for me to walk away (close the screen) feeling satsfied. So glad she's getting some new Friday Night Memories (yes, that is now capital worthy in my mind!)Loved it ) Can't wait for more

Jules.

That was sweet.:)

I loved the ending of this. it was so sweet and perfect.

That was sad but touching and beautiful.

Beautifully written.I was truly touched.

Hey there, oh my gosh, this was... I am speechless, however I could just see this happening. Poor Ziva. I love how Tony was supportive and said nothing but was there for her. I am still speechless. WOW! Fantastic is an understatement.

ME, this is sad and disturbing, but really wonderfully written.

This is probably a much more realistic view of what Ziva went through.

As difficult as it was to read, I imagine it was even more difficult to write.

Kudos to you!

It's funny, I was watching Recoil earlier, where Ziva slams Tony's hand out of they way for trying to touch her after only an afternoon of trauma, and I found myself wondering where that version of Ziva had gotten lost in the writer's room post-Somalia. And it turns out you found her. This was very intense, and very well done.

Wonderfully constructed, ME. A terrible tale beautifully told. The untold warmth or degradation of human touch. You really weave the words nicely.

Thanks for sharing.

Intense. This was really good. I don't want to say I enjoyed it, because enjoy feels like to happy an emotion for the mood of the piece. I think you captured the character personalities really well. Great story.

I'm curious to see what the writers do with Ziva this season. There's no way in the world that she can just move on without some difficulties and bad memories.

That was so sad, and I can see it play out exactly like this. I mean Ziva is still troubled and although she tries to hide it it is going to have to spill forth at some point and you wrote it wonderfully.

I think that once Tony hears the horrors that Ziva faced he will cry and be incredibly angry at the same time.

I really like this story though I don't think those are the right words with how sad it was. I give you kudos. :]

As painful as it was to read, I think this is a more realistic view of what happened to Ziva in the camp and some of what she would go through back among the general public. I understand why TPTB don't want to dwell on the after effects of such an experience, and why the audience would not want to see an accurate account PTSD, which is why it irks me that they went down that road in the first place.

The fact that you can write on such a variety of topics demonstrates talent. Made me cry, and I rarely cry reading fan fics.

Brilliant. Troubling, but brilliant. And dead on. Exactly the way I could see things play out, though I'm not certain TPTB could ever really delve into the exact horrors of what Ziva most likely experienced. Really great job.