Is... that all?
Say it ain't so!
Usually. I hate "Next Generation" fics in any fandom, but THIS... it has... POTENTIAL, and lots of it.
This was funny, basically in character, and witty. Just avoid turning your character in to a Mary-Sue. Please. It has that kind of potential, too, which isn't good. But of course, it also has the GOOD kind, which can go anywhere!
So please,*please*, PLEASE, for the LOVE of GOD, keep writing, because this. is. GOOD!

Was that a little blunt? If it was, sorry! But some of these fanfic writers need to be whipped into shape! So let's get a move on with it- what happens next?!?!?!

this story is excellent! funny and interesting :D
cant wait to read more!

I thought this was totally cute! "Next generation" fics usually leave me cold but I thought this was totally believable--and funny-and I'd love to read more if you were up for it.

loved it!!

this is a great start hope you keep it going

YES A CHICK KICKING A HOCKEY PLAYER IN THE NADS, SWEET!

Please, please, PLEASE put Andy and Allison's kid in, oh and nerdy Brian's.

I love this story! keep writing!!

:) that was good, made me want to watch the film again. lol. loved the film, one of my favourite films :)

LOL
This story is so funny! I love the Dad-Daughter humor^_^
And I second the notion of Breakfast Club being a classic and timeless movie! Its awesome! Too cool for school;D
Hope you update soon!
Love,
Lori