Lovely! Especially how they are in character, awesome work!

Nope, it's not bad at all, in fact, sounded pretty much like Megs and Screamer usual banter after another failed plan. The difference perhaps was in seeing megatron, albeit silently, admitting that it's his failure rather than Screamer's... nice story!

Nice work!

That sounds like Megatron & Starscream! Good job! I think writing anything about Decepticons is harder than writing about Autobots. It's much easier for them to become OOC in my opinion. Keep up the good work!

I'll always enjoy a good Starscream-Megatron "back and forth" verbal joust; and any story that mentions "jet judo" earns bonus points from me!

It was very good for your first attempt, I enjoyed it. If there is a next time, Megatron isn't as patient to argue with Starscream he will usually shoot him first and then Starscream will plead from the ground and try to plead his point. Starscream is a coward first and foremost and usually won't question Megatron outright, unless he can avoid injuries. Although he is a bit prideful so his mouth does get him into trouble.

I really enjoyed it though, great job.

A good first attempt on writing something about the Decepticons. Megatron and Starscream were quite in character. :)

careful, you mix up "loose" with "lose".
it was also a bit on the shortish side, but that's just me saying.
Other than that, i enjoy Megatron and Starscream banter that doesn't spiral into slash, so thank you.
it also is interesting that in a twisted perverse sense, Starscream is helping Megatron, at least in getting him to acknowledge his weaknesses even if it means pain on his part.
Whether starscream planned it all entirely to help Megatron or for his own selfish wants is up to opinion.