This is a beautiful one shot. Elliot's anger and Liv's apathy towards the whole thing is played out through a convoluted, seamless dialogue and character monologue. I love everything about this piece, especially how there's a feeling that as much as it's become acustomed in their partnership, there's a sense of balance... Yet, there's also a sense that this is some type of turning point- some unwritten threshold that's been crossed...I'm not sure that made sense, but this is a great story. :) Definitely one of my new favorites.

This is great!

Great fic. I hope there is more to come.

That was amazingly done :)

Wow, that was incredible! I think you captured perfectly how they have been with each other. I think it is getting better, but it was this way for a long time. Loved the end with her saying she is still with him, but he needs help. I hope you continue this, but even if you don't it I loved it.