i love this it is so good!

i only wish that the first one was on your fanfiction profile too!

"You can suffer my anger right now… which sounds better?" OH Perfect! I laughed so hard. Great story!

Woah... This story was... AWSOME! D It's definitely one of my MOST FAVORITE stories!

what a plot twist i never expected bulma to give her life like that.i hope vegeta finds out about the dragonballs and is abble to wish bulma back to story very sad ending.

i wonder now that trunks has gone ape how things will turn out will his father transform to try and calm him down. what about bulma wiull vegeta get their in time to help her.

this is one thing Ive messed over the years is a fanfict that actually their is something to review and makes you want to review every or almost every chapter.i wonder if vegeta will teach trunks how to control that they will not have to cut of his tail.

were will vegeta bulma and trunks go from here on story by the of the best stories iv red in beleve their is still a story of this qality on

im glad the fanfict isnt ended their.i wonder how trunks will take the news he is taken by vegeta as it is .will trunks acend at some pount will vegeta train story one of the best iv ever red on this site.

i wonder why bulma dosnt recognize vegeta.i wonder what vegeta will do to make her recofgnize him.

how sweat and ironic trunks is trying to play matchmaker between vegeta and bulma not knowing of core that they already know and love each outer. great story keep up the good one is even better than the first story in my opinion.

its bean a long time seance ive bean charged up like this for a fanfict on this site no seames all the good fanfics have bean taken down at lest most of is a rely refreshing dose of what i what used to be on this site as far as good fanfiction vegeta tell tr5unks that he is his father.

i pity napa he will be luky if vegeta lets him fanfict keap up the good work.

i bet the next chapter vegeta and bulma meat aagain what will be their will trunks reactions be.i wonder how bulma was able to teach trunks to read story so far keap up the good work.

vegeta is sensing bulma his mate is they ghave bonded with each outer in some way.

i wonder when vegeta will relize that it is bulma that is thbbe head sientest and that that is his son he was talking too. great fanfict so far i can easly see why you have over 2000 most iv ever sean on in a long time.