Update soon! :)

LOL,
Oh my! That was a riot! XD
Please, oh please, update soon! I can't wait to read what happens next! :D

Yep like I said before I like the little cliffhanger with the teacher's note you left it on. I'm excited for what's to come as well! ;) Please keep it up.

I can't wait for the next instalment! This is getting so interesting. ^^

Wow, definately something I didn't expect. I'm interested and I hope the next chapter is just as exciting.

I think your dialogue is one of the strongest features of this so far, but I think messed up your formatting a little on one line which just reads "!", a heads up there!
Anyway I look forward to reading more. Like I said I think the dialogue is coming along more naturally and you include just the right amount of description. I am eagerly awaiting our Casper/trio characters though! xD
PS: you needn't have mentioned me, I barely helped! But thank you very much for the namecheck! Nice of you!

I really want to know what they're keeping from her, this chapter was good :)

Good characterisation and dialogue. Waiting anxiously to read more.

AW

This looks really interesting, and she seems like an interesting character. Can't wait to read more :)

I can say this caught my attention. I'm not too fond of OC central stories, but this one's an exception. Amelia is definately an interesting character, and apperently a good fighter since she can beat up three boys all by her lonesome. You definately have a potential gold mine and I can't wait to read Chapter 2. I'll be keeping my eye out for it, and I subscirbed to the story, so you have a plus 1 in watchers.
Good luck with the story.

it a good story