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Nothing 6/19/11 . chapter 8
Your side stories are very good. You should do Cammy and Aaron. My favorite one would have to be the one s with Barrett and Dorothy ( but my real favorite is Cecilia and Kyle.)
PeeKay 8/3/10 . chapter 8
Write more, please! I love them especially the Barrett and Dorothy ones :)

I don't know about AU pairings unless you'll make them on a friendship level like with Aria and Roy.

Overall, keep it up, love the fact they're all in character and the stories are sweet
Eris 7/18/10 . chapter 8
Haha, I can totally see that being in-game. Poor Kyle. xD

I probably wouldn't mind AU pairings, seeing as you can probably pull them off easily. DorothyxRay would be super-cute. ;;
K. Riley 7/12/10 . chapter 7
Aww, that was cute I like them Roy reminiscing about Kyle, and the part about Alicia's hat made me smile xD

(As much I do love Barrett/Dorothy, I do think Ray/Dorothy's pretty cute, romantically or as a friendship Maybe they could talk about their respective crushes? Er, I dunno, haha xD Shame they don't mention each other, despite the two of them almost always in the clinic together.)
Eris 7/6/10 . chapter 6
These are too cuuute 3

I love your writing style.

Everyone's exactly in character x3
K. Riley 6/30/10 . chapter 6
I was SO waiting for another one-shot with these two I love it! Barrett being worried, Cammy teasing Dorothy about "her boyfriend", the deal, and especially the end. It made me smile

Your one-shots are just wonderful
Silver and Gold Angels 6/26/10 . chapter 5
These are cute.

Orlando, the bees and Aria; Max and his sword; Dorothy and Barrett; Max and Julia; and then Max and Rosalind.

Maybe your next oneshot can be AaronXLeann or Aaron and Aria (brother sister interaction)

These are too cute. I might read them again.
K. Riley 6/24/10 . chapter 4
I'm pretty neutral to this couple, but this was super cute I like Julia's crush on Max and how playful they are.
K. Riley 6/21/10 . chapter 3
Aww, I love this couple and seeing fanfic for them makes me very happy Nice job keeping them in character and I love the whole 'our secret' thing. So cute
Kitsune no Tora 11/4/09 . chapter 1
Aww, this was adorable. I love the connection to the bees, it's a nice touch.

Orland /is/ in the character list, maybe you just missed him? O.o I just checked, and he's there, and I don't remember him being missing beforehand...
Ichigo -usagi Wizu 11/3/09 . chapter 1
So cute-! XD
DoTSnDaSHES 11/3/09 . chapter 1
Heh...awesome story...random...but very very good

Cute and love the ramblings at beginning.
Anima Ignis 11/1/09 . chapter 1
O_O I never knew you played Rune factory too...

Anyway the story is pretty cute and the reference to the bees were pretty cool

- Zero
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