Noooo! Rose can't die! It can't end like that. She and the Doctor need to get back together!

Cliff-hangers are good. Doc responds well to stress.

please more more more more more MORE can't wait for more please more soon I know it's been 2 years but I just came across the story and I love more MORE I wonder if Rose really dies

Oh come on now! I'm sure you can breathe some life back into this story after a year!

Will the Doctor get back to Rose in time? How does SG1 work into this? The Doctor won't kill Jack will he? More importantly, what happened to make Rose that way? Why is she dying?

Please update soon!

!AkumakoRonso

Ok I won't yell for the ending. It's a good story so far. But I do have to say you can't leave us hanging with a cliff hanger like that for so long you really need to fininsh this story

Oh wow that is so good. MORE PLEASE !

Nice cliffhanger! Really hope you get back to this when you have time.

I'm still not sure were this may lead with the Doctor and Rose and Vala being a time traveler herself. But it all boyles down to Rose surviving and giving the Doctor the clues he needs to help her. :D

Bloody Hell...

Oh Lord, I hope this continues...

Wow I hope you plan to update

Yay a new chapter! thanks for update! this chapter was realy neat!

I would just like to point out how well written this was.

It's obviously factured and a little manic and tone, which is perfect because that was what you were going for and the style and tone really evoked those same feelings from your audience. At the same time though, you seperated different sections of the ramblings (for lack of a better word)that had the same themes with lines from the show to give the chapter flow and tie it to canon. Then, repeating certain words throughout those sections for flow and emphasis.

I also loved how you controlled the fracturing of the thoughts so to speak. A period here or there to add emphasis to the things you wanted emphasis on.

In short, you really played the audience like a harp with this chapter. Very well done.

This story is good! Thanks for the torchwood character info. I have not woched it (yet).

I can't wait for you to fill in some of the blanks here. You've used suspense as a plot element very well in this story, keeping the reader coming back for more. So when are Rose and the Doctor going to reunite, she was always my favorite out of the Doctor's companions.