oh my god..this was...the best...axuroku fanfiction iv ever read! it was so hot and intense...im such a yaoi fan, expecially for these guys...everything about it was sexy, keep making more like this! (if your up to it, of course)...;)

oh my god, Roxas is such a little tease. :P

that was hilarious and well done. :DD

Ahahaha! I remember you sending this to me a while ago! But I think you've added to it since then, because I don't remember that last part. Hmm...I could probably go check...it's probably still in a folder somewhere...but ah, I'm too lazy to go digging.

So I dunno how much of this is new from what you showed me, but I liked the new ending, ehehe. Damn those two are horny today. All night long and then all morning...hurr. *pervy smirk*

Way to post this babe! I enjoyed an excuse to re-read it! :D

WHOA SMUT FEST 8D I almost feel bad for getting so much good smut all at once. Brilliant!! Usually when I see sex scenes in fanfics it's usually no more than half a page, but I admire you for going on for... god knows how many pages of sex - without it getting boring at all! I think sex scenes are one of the hardest things to keep interesting, especially because there's only so many words you can use to describe it.

Wow, Axel and Roxas sure have some stamina in them... multiple rounds in bed, and then some in the kitchen!? Hahahaha. I like how you took it nice and slow, especially because a lot of people tend to "bam! penetration!" and then get it over with. The foreplay is the best part :) Passionate and steamy!! Love it! I don't know if my art even satisfies a fraction of the pure sexy that is your fic, but I appreciate the PR! Love you, and good job!

that was sounded as delicious as it probably was... that makes no sense but boy, was that story so fun to read!

OMFG!
that was so amazing!
hahaha they really went at it XD
happy (belated) halloween!
<3

Okay, that was amazing. I will never be able to look at chocolate sauce again without thinking about this. Or whipped cream or maple syrup. And the fact that Axel works at an ice cream shop made the whole thing better, at least for me. Man, I wish I'd had this to come home to after work... Back when I worked at an ice cream place and had an idiotic manager, that is. Would have made the whole job worth keeping...

Happy Halloween!

-Kiki

This is the best treat one could receive on Halloween. xD

damn that was hot! lol Axel sure liked the surprise! xD awesome job!

I just wanted to say that I really love this story and I thought that it was really hot! xD
I love the whole maid roleplaying thing! ;3
I love kingdom hearts and I loved this fanfiction!
You rock and don't stop writing your lovely work ;D

~emosasuke™

I LOVED THIS FIC!
-bows to you-

dude, whats funny is that im being a french maid roxas for halloween this year! no joke!

...teehee

XD

xox Rose

/drool/ oh my god that's so hot.

/runs off to look at fanart/

write more akuroku yeah~

*nosebleeds*

Lol I love the title XD And I also love when Roxas cross-dresses *-* I have seen the fanart (KH Axel and Roxas gift), It's too cute ! ^w^

Oh my god, they completely destroy everything in their love-making session XD

This night was "passionate" to say the least... and they still are able to walk ?! XD


(Sorry for the bad english again ^^")

XDXD *Nosebleeds* whoa... How are they still /walking/? XD this was amusing and sexy... Goddamn, that dress sounds awesome.

I had no idea you could write something like this. -laughs- Amazing. :3

So impressed,
-Minikimii