This was really beautiful...

A touching story =]

Beautiful... So beautiful

I really enjoyed reading this. It was beautiful.

That's a very thoughtful story. I really like your choice of narrator - what we get is both an insightful and incomplete account of Hermione and Severus' relationship, which leaves space to fill the blanks and adds to the wistful atmosphere of the story. I've really enjoyed this.

A most interesting piece indeed. I like it very much.

I ran across this story while procrastinating on my studying, and fell in love. The language is beautiful, the images are beautiful, the entire story is beautiful, moving, and subtle. What an absolutely gorgeous story, and the pov is very skillfully done.

Oh, this was beautiful! A real gem. Bravo!

Very nicely done, though Hermione was too fragile for me. The writing has an effective, dreamy-memory quality, told simply from a child's perspective.

That was touching. Really enjoyed it- especially the narrator.

Aww. I love this!!
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I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!

This was simply gorgeous. The POV is brilliant, and the ache of longing and slow progression is breathtaking. Small details and large paint a vivid picture here. Such a lyrical piece. Brava!

A lovely story, very well written and so moving at the end! I thought it was fantastic! :)

fantastic. One of a handful of good things to come out of the Marriage Law crap.

lanie