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Lord Sia
2009-11-26 . chapter 1
I don't know whether to laugh or cry, or more likely, cry because I'm laughing so hard or laugh becuase I'm done crying.

Funny shit.
Garnet Avi
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
Actually surprisingly amusing. Thanks for posting. Made me lol :P
FuzzyBoots
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
Ah yes. Classic "bathroom psychic". :) That was entertaining.
TardisIsTheOnlyWayToTravel
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
“There's a precog like me on a beach with a bunch of bowling balls. He just teleports them where they're needed rather than going places in person,” Tattletale explained.

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*laughs at the image*
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Lightspeed looked suspiciously at her younger brother in a way that would spell trouble for years to come as he hit his teens and was tempted by the girl's locker room.

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*snorts* Heh.
Sdarian
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
That's pretty good. I can really see myself doing something like this if I had the powers he did.
redhelling
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
lol, funny set up. it'd be fun to see how you plan to write a good story with a guy that sits on the beach all day long :D
Jimm
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.
deitarion/SSokolow
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
Now THAT is a fun SI oneshot. :)
Daniel14541
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
Ok realistically can you put up those stories you mentioned in the author notes somewhere so that they can be read? Either that or e-mail them to me? This sounds incredibly selfish to me but I host a small mailing list for good SI's whenever a new story comes up I send out the pertenant details to interested parties. The people I send it to generally don't leave reviews but when they do I pass them on.


So um, having two more would help.
Sexy Neko Hibiki
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
That's pretty much what I would do.

Except I'd have guys and girls on the island too there.

Then I'd myself a nice little pansexual orgy with them, oh yeah!^_^
red-jacobson
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
you are a very silly person! that's all I really wanted to say *GRIN*

red
Baughn
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
Heh. You know, with that sort of power, I'd be a bit more.. active. :P

Still funny, in a way that taking over the world for its own good wouldn't be.
mian-toris
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
Pure Gold.
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