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Vana1970
2009-11-10 . chapter 9
Loved how you got Ronon apologising for being a bad patient.

Yay he's better although Rodney's a tattle tale.

Thanks for the story.
sobz
2009-11-10 . chapter 9
great fic
when's the next one coming?
Shadows-of-Realm
2009-11-09 . chapter 9
Great chapter!! So what's coming next from the amazing mind of Natasha?
bailey1ak
2009-11-09 . chapter 9
Rodney couldn't hold it in I see. Great clearing the air between Ronon and Jennifer. Sad to see another story end.
Belmene
2009-11-09 . chapter 9
Thanks for this story.
bellestarr01
2009-11-09 . chapter 9
Wo Ho! Another great story! What's Next? Just kidding...For now lol
hifield
2009-11-09 . chapter 9
It was a very nice story and leave it to Rodney to tell him what a jerk he was.

Now you need to do a sequel and let us know how the couple are doing once everyone's healed.

Good job!
bailey1ak
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Glad to see that at the moment Ronon is feeling well. Funny how worried Rodney is.
Vana1970
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Really liked the humour in this chapter.

“McKay will you go get something to eat?” Sheppard eventually snapped.

“What if he wakes up when I'm gone?”

“I'll get peace.” Ronon said hoarsely.

LOL, followed by Rodney telling Ronon he had a kids disease, priceless.

Oh is there trouble ahead or are we recovering?

Please update soon.
Vana1970
2009-11-08 . chapter 7
Oh poor Jennifer, she's exhausted and having to put up with a grumpy Satedan and Rodney.

Shingles huh? Nasty can I dab on the calomine lotion... sorry you took my mind elsewhere.

Great update.
Vana1970
2009-11-08 . chapter 6
LOL so glad you worked House in there !

Now you have me worried, all those symptoms and no ideas.

Running to chapter 7 as we speak.
Shadows-of-Realm
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Well... Ronan seems like he's going to live. Good for him... I was kind of worried, personally, also it looks like 1, maybe 2 chapters left?
sobz
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Rodney at his most annoying. gotta love it!
hifield
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Good, good, good ... but I'm still a bit worried this isn't over. Loved the banter between all the team members. It was really creative how you put this all together! I'm ready for more!
thewarpedmind1
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
That recovery seemed a little to quick so I'm wondering what else is going to happen?? Soomething Bad? lol
Geat Chapter!!
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