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billy13579
2009-12-14 . chapter 3
This chapter flows far better than the previous two. Good stuff!

This story has reached that point of no return in my mind where I am now a fan of this story.

Hope the next chapter's up soon!
ecchansama
2009-12-13 . chapter 3
As you ordered us in the prologue...
*nibbles Weebee*
Yes, I'm a rather rabid fan. :P

Cute little thing this, I'm sure it'll really wreck havoc on the Canon storyline. I'm looking forward to see more.
/ecchansama
OBSERVER01
2009-12-11 . chapter 3
good chapter.keep it up
reader
2009-12-11 . chapter 1
No matter how hard I try to think of it, I cant see the potential in Ranma and Sakura interacting. Reading the first chapter doesnt seem to be changing my mind either.

The story, quite frankly, is boring.
TegwenielWestwind
2009-12-11 . chapter 3
Glad to see this continued. Such a fun story.
Zero-Vision
2009-12-11 . chapter 3
cool concept. good writing.
god of stuff
2009-12-11 . chapter 3
Another great chapter. I'm liking the way Ranma and Sakura interact with one another. Wonder how the bigwigs are going to take Ranma's presence.
Bobboky
2009-12-11 . chapter 3
sweet
Adeptis
2009-12-10 . chapter 3
Good story.
Materia-Blade
2009-12-10 . chapter 3
*blinks*

Wow. This fic is fricking awesome! How long till the next chapter? I can't wait!

Ja!

MB
James Axelrad
2009-12-10 . chapter 3
fun chapter. definitely some interesting things going on. hope to see more at some point.

kinda curious as to what all ranma does up in sakura's head though.
Riniko22
2009-12-10 . chapter 3
Glad to see a new chapter up. Still enjoying the story, don't worry about the length too much, sometimes the story muse doesn't flow and other times it runs like a raging river. Thought having Ranma take Kabuto's scroll was pretty funny. Looking forward to the next chapter.
stc-dragon
2009-12-10 . chapter 3
man that was funny wonder what kakashi will do when he talks to them
Quathis
2009-12-10 . chapter 3
The irony of Naruto saying something to the effect that there shouldn't be that many clones was hilarious to me. Don't know if that was your intention, but that was my response. Good to see Ranma having a better outlook on Naruto than most other people, and accepted his plan without complaint (threats are motivation, not complaints). Should be interesting to see how they do in the prelims . . . though if Kabuto's team doesn't make it, will they need prelims? Until next time.
tatewaki2000
2009-12-10 . chapter 3
An update! :D

Yay!

And it's good...Yay!

Now back to my tests...
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T_T
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