Not seen OFITG in ages but I think you wrote Patrick really well. Mostly because I've been too lazy to get on with my serioues fics I've recently delved into the world of Red Dwarf spoofs and groupings of various characters from different shows... well one parody of "Polymorph II - Emohawk" and "Nobody Expects The Spanish Inquisition" You and a few other fiction writers just gave me the idea of the characters from my various favourite comedy shows coming together to stay at fawlty towers, will have to bring Victor back from the dead... hm
Somebody: But you're dead!
Victory: Well i couldn't bludy well turn up half rotting with maggots crawling up my leg could I? Got to keep it on the air! Just because I'm dead it means I have to come to the hotel with a missing eye and flaking flesh JUST because I'm dead now can I? *looks down and sees maggot crawling up leg* I DONT believe it!
Humphrey (from yes minister/priminister): Mr Meldrew, with your ability to easily come out looking like the injured party, i.e your ability to manipulate others, your skill of turning a question into another question, and your total denile of things, even when they are visually staring you in the face... Have you considered becoming a civil servant?
Probably chap but... meh, anyway! GREAT fic, loved the kind of dark thoughts of poor plagued Patrick, so, yeah... review over... if it can be called a review...

Fantasic :-) You've got him perfectly, even including the comedy from the end. Keep writing.

I love this! One of my favorite programs and my second-favorite episode. I think you've captured Patrick perfectly - please write more!