Wow, very interesting concept. Please write more! Keep going!!

Call an ambulance!! What you meant to say was that she was critically injured...right? How's Randy going to take this? How's Adrian going to take this?? Otherwise, hurry and post the next chapter.

Thanks,
SpaceCadet

Wow, you have me hooked, can't wait for more!

Aw I don't think you should kill Sharona that would kill Randy. Few grammar issues but good story so far. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more.