|Reviews for Undeadwood|
| Florence of Arabia 8/17/12 . chapter 1
I love this story! Its hilarious and so clever and original. Also as I think through it that is exactly how I picture everyone in Deadwood reacting to a mob of zombies. Also the bit about Richardson and the antler made me laugh out loud.
| SevysGal 5/1/11 . chapter 1
I usually don't go in for the zombie stories. But this made me giggle. Well done. :)
| Thatsaporkpie 2/13/11 . chapter 1
Al looked down at her with a wry expression:
"Good on you - but I'm going to have second thoughts about ever putting anything of mine in your mouth again."
Oh my gosh! That bit got me, but then maybe I just have a dirty mind ;) This was honestly great! I kind of laughed, even though it probably wasn't intentionally funny. You write everyone so true to character, I loved it. And adding zombies sure was an exciting, new twist :D Excellent job!
| Not Human 12/20/10 . chapter 1
Why aren't there more Deadwood zombie stories? This is perfect. I especially like how Wu's narrative is familiar except for 'cocksuckas' and 'Swedgen'. I would really dearly like to see a sequel or an expansion.
| Kimmae 11/10/09 . chapter 1
AHAH! The perfect parody if I ever imagined one for Deadwood. You had the characters dead on (haha joke) for how they'd react to a zombie apocalypse (I've decided, now that I've typed that, I can't take myself seriously now). AND it's awesome how the items are numbered. If you ever wanted to, I'd say you should expand on each point. It would be AWESOME!
For 5: separate the paragraphs, put a period at the end of Trixie's line, and "Trixie helped" rather than "help".
For 6: Alma's line should be a separate paragraph from Jane's line. Include Jane entering the room and turning the air blue s'more, mayhap?
Overall: some ';' were used when ',' should have been used.
P.S. WICKED AWESOME STORY PAL
| atheneblue 11/10/09 . chapter 1
Well done! Cleverly written - I love it!