Naruto that poor, poor fool... Why?!? I feel so sorry for him at this moment. Please update soon!

Truly great!

So much tension and all mysterious-like. The only tiny problem I had was already mentioned by other reviewers. But other than that I really can't wait till you update again, it's an amazing start already. ^^

O okay so it is Second Person!!I was confused in te first chapter thinking Gaara Might be telling it all or somthing...Anyways!GOOD JOB!!UPDATE!!

amazing story so far

but the switching pov's can get a little confusing
why dont you try labeling? like ya know if it was garaa's pov you put that on top

Lol I love it! But could you put the name of the person thats telling the story so that it's not as confusing?

This story is AWESOME! It is so not horrible, i hope you continue because this story rocks!!

So far, I liked the story very much. :) As a prologue, this one worked perfectly! The different people commenting it first, it builds up tension and...

I want more. :) Please update soon!

I love it even if sasuke is a jerk! It Would be more funny if sasuke was thé first to fall in love with naruto! Please update soon

Great wait to start what looks like a promising fic! Love your characterization of the characters and the way the emotions are really there.

Please continue! ^^

I love it! Sakura is just a **! Please write more soon! Poor Gaara...