Finally I found the time to read the rest of this, and thank God I did. I really enjoyed the bathing scene, 'cause Prowl and Sunstreaker are such an unusual pairing (if you can talk about a "pairing" here), and I could see Daniel's drawing of the Autobots crystal clear in my mind ;-). And the last two chapters were so sweet and touching, I actually had to blink away a tear. Very well done!

So sad. So so sad. RIP G1 Prowl & now TFA Prowl.

C.D.

This chapter brings a smile to my face.

C.D.

Wow. I'm guessing he was doing advance Soduko. Someone would have to make super advance for Prowl.

C.D.

You have some really cute little tales in here. (Prowl glued to the floor, for instance). Chapter 7 made me wibble. And the last ne made me cry. Wonderful job, Beregond.

*blinks repeatedly* Painful, but done in a truely beautiful fashion. Nice job.

I'm sad that it had to end, story wise and that you used the movie verse for it. Though it well thought out, and I enjoyed reading it.

This is... very sad. I really disliked the movie where they all died so easily. It's not fair.

I thought that having Sideswipe try and comfort Bluestreak was a very nice touch, especially since you're using Sides to recount his views on Prowl and the role he played in his life. It sort of completes the circle of the story, and gives Prowl's life rememberence and a somewhat satisfying finish, though it is very sad to see Blue in such a state. The image of Sides sitting outside Blue's door and talking to him was very touching.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful fic.

- Refracted Imagination

This chapter was very sweet, with Blue making a handmade gift for Prowl and Sunny lending him his paints and all, and you really nicely showed the close bond between the two Datsuns. Great chapter!

- Refracted Imagination

That's so sad! It made me want to cry, no kidding. Poor Blue and Sideswipe. . .

i think this is the most sad chapter you had in this story.

i really hated that movie where they all died :(

and poor Blue.

good chapter.

Sunstreaker letting Blue use his paints? aww that was another nice thing he did.

and it was nice Blue made Prowl a going away gift

WHAHAHAHA!! What sad two ending chapters! *snif* I didn't expect you to end it like that.

Ohh I cried I actually cried... such a beautiful story... guessing that's the end now... thankyou for this story... there really aren't enough decent Prowl stories out tthere. *sniff* I miss and love Prowl *goes to howl in the corner* loved this whole thing well done! ^_^

I think it's quite natural that Prowl would enjoy a logic game like Sudoku, and very amusing that the others don't suspect its the reason why he stays holed up in his office.

Nice chapter, and as much as I don't really like seeing Prowl's end, I look forward to reading it.

- Refracted Imagination