A nice little love note to the series and to Mr. S. Loved Shego's crack about the bill collector - that really was a twofer, in that it fit perfectly into the chapter and also was perfectly in tune with the show's sensibility. But then, what are the odds that I won't like a MrDrP fic? Not just statistically unlikely - impossible.

heh very cute

-Rose

A truley hillarious fic, great work.

"My appearance still made people laugh, with that hearty jovial laugh so good for the health." -- Samuel Beckett, "The End"

Very pleased to see the Mr. Stoppable-Rufus-Hana Stoppable factor in action.

You do a very fine job with Hana, and I would be very happy to see her make more appearances in your stories. Also liked how she referred to Kim as her big sister.

Shego's dialog was a highlight as always, especially with her interaction with Hana.

Dr. Director's final line was funny, but it begs the question of why GJ didn't try to do something to rescue their two top agents themselves. And why didn't some citizen from Middleton attempt to thwart Drakken's plan as he showed up at each of their doors--at least the extent of not giving any candy? Sure, there's the Shego factor to consider. But even as far as that does go, it doesn't counter-balance the Drakken factor.

Maybe Drakken and Shego should have traded costumes? Shego already is found of the harlequin look after all.

this is so cute!




A+

Great ending. Nice to see Hana save the day; she and Rufus make a good team.

I kinda figured Shego would find a better use for a mind controlled team possible than getting free candy; I just couldn't see them letting Kim and Ron go voluntarily.

While I liked this ending, it had a good feel of finality, I wish I could see the reception Drakken and Shego would get in prison dressed like that. :)

Great job, glad you added this chapter (even if it was under fear of rocks).

Oh this was just wonderful. WONDERFUL. Of course, I can see this being the start of a tradition of Pranking/plotting for Halloween...let all others take cover.

Still laughing! thanks!

Shego...taken down by a five year old Hana! Bondigity! That was great. :)

Shego can never show her face after being defeated by a five year old. And that costume will add more humiliation. Never mess with the Possible/Stoppable Team. You will only regret it. It was also pretty funny too.

Heh, excellent story!

Keep the good writing.

Go Hana go! Lots of love for the reserves in this one. Come on MrDrP admit it, you couldn't let Kim and Ron loose to Drakken and Shego could you?

Great ending! We usually don't see the Stoppables used very much in stories, and this works!

5 year old Hana was near perfect.

As always, the dialogue and quips are what make your stories great MrDrP...

Until the next...

Now where's my cape.

I would have been rolling on the flow laughing my biscuit off, but I have to keep it quite, my son has homework.

Glad to see there's a Rufus-Mr. Stoppable-Hana Stoppable Factor, my lord they're Unstoppable, or rather they are Stoppables, no I mean they can't be stopp-. I need to stop my head is starting to hurt.

Fun two step, glad to see everything back in place.

Thanks

(I'm still working on the Ruffus stuff, just getting a little stuck)

Great follow-up, which I wasn't expecting, thought it was a one-shot for some reason. Gave a good belly laugh at the scene that took place in the Stoppable residence. Hana getting scolded by her father to be polite when she kicks butt was hilarious as well as the irony of Mr. Stoppable's words about it being unfair were great. An excellent conclusion with Ron's weirdly romantic compliments. Until next time!

Well, MrDrP, I didn't expect this, but I'm not one to look a gift horse in the mouth. So, that's two for Mr. Stoppable, three for Hana, and... I think we've all lost count of how many times Rufus saved Kim and Ron's skins. You'd think Ron would be upset that villains kept all the good candy for themselves. Anyway, nice to see that the bad guys got theirs' in the end. I got to ask though, was the story I wrote part of the reason you had a change of heart?