Nice to see some good Code Lyoko fanfiction from an author I already follow. Too risky to go looking for it from unfamiliar authors.

very interesting...good grammar and detail, except I would have thought after having sex with Aelita Jeremie would be less awkward with her, and you make her seem more manipulative than she usually is on the show. However, this is a very good fic overall, one I couldn't tear my eyes from. you should add another chapter soon.

thats a cool story, i cant wait for the next one

I don't see this well written J/A fics to often, most people tend to concentrate on U/Y, but it was still a pleasure reading this exellent piece of fiction, i also liked how it concentrated on the more mature side of Aelita and Jeremies relationship.

I do hope you will write more wonderful J/A fics like this.