Remarkably well written- read like the actual novels.

Very believable. Eloquent and sophisticated but harsh and quick. I LOVED it. You captured their characters beautifully. I really liked how you ended it. It feels like something Jim wrote, but at the same time, I can tell you put your own twist to it. Very good! More, More! 8D

Interesting idea, but wouldn't Isana try to get a feel of his loyalty to Tavi. She puts Tavi ahead of all else.