This is amazing!
I was just thinking earlier about how people are so Jekyll and Hyde like, not so much to the extremes but just in everyday life, and you've captured that so perfectly!! The message in this is so clear, and it's so brilliantly written!

(And good luck handing it in for Eng Lit, I'm also doing Eng Lit and using Jekyll and Hyde, but I had to write a short-story sort of thing using ideas from the book)

I don't know about all those non-reviewers, but I thought it was great! Please keep posting new material! No pressure, though. =P