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MacyMisaRules
2009-11-23 . chapter 5
This story is awesome and very funny :D I think it was a great twist to put Macy as the best friend and Stella as the obsessed fangirl. Just amazing, please update soon :D
From the End of Heaven
2009-11-21 . chapter 5
Episode 5 yay! I was so happy when I saw this was updated!
I think you worked it all out wonderfully- love it love it!
"But thank God you're Macy" true words Kevin.
I love Shoe teasing Macy about being a boy- and all the following reactions. (Especially Stella and "I've seen the photo's remember?" good good stuff! )
I so so love the follow through of what happens after Carl licks Kevin's guitar.

He puffed up his chest, “No. It’s just a guitar.”

She gave him a pointed look and he gulped.

“Yes!”

Aww Kev!
Silly boys.
Love it- love it lots!
FlyingFree728
2009-11-19 . chapter 5
AWW!! :) I love it!! :) The ending was so cute!! :) YAY!! Stella's plan worked!! :)
Hey-Hayley
2009-11-19 . chapter 5
This is so clever. It's unbelievable!
:)
Mwhahahaha18
2009-11-18 . chapter 5
I am definatly liking this story and can't wait to read more!
Standard-Ang3l
2009-11-18 . chapter 5
I am loving the adorable Kacy-ness of this entire story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!
xovickixo
2009-11-17 . chapter 4
Fab use of the little fangirl. I can def see the Misa store being a fav haunt for fans because of Macy's tie-in with the band/
"“Wow, and he’s even smiling just a little,” Macy said in shock. “That makes his compliment worth about ten times more.”" --very cute!
Stella was great in this. Loved the sketches she was terrified to show the boys. And yay that it's Nick ruining Kevin and Macy's moment that helps her speak out. Go, Stella!
Great updates! I look forward to seeing what you've done with The Shoe/"Band's Best Friend"
xovickixo
2009-11-17 . chapter 3
The switch between Stella and Macy in this chapter is seamless! The pizza binging would very much effect both a stylist and a trainer the same way...
I love that they're stylist, Linda, clearly doesn't care as much. Letting Joe be photographed out in sweatpants?! Scandalous indeed! :)
Also, THANK YOU, for having Macy call out the guys on using "playas" and the like...omg, so bad!
"Kevin glanced cluelessly at his brothers. Why was he the one being targeted?" --oh, Kevin...your time shall come.
Bryn
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
I love this whole thing- it is epically awesome!
I will try to wait patiently for more.
key word try.
So good!!
LeotaFinck
2009-11-16 . chapter 4
I agree! This chapter is my favourite so far! :D
bezgraniczna
2009-11-16 . chapter 4
"“Okay, I have to call you out something. I saw Efron wearing this outfit last week. I remember because he looked better than me,” Joe muttered bitterly.
(...)Stella glared at him, “Check the date on that sketch. I designed that outfit months ago. I make trends I don’t follow them.”"


It's soo Joe and Stella :) Just lov it! Can't wait for next!
From the End of Heaven
2009-11-16 . chapter 4
I think you worked this out excellently.
I have to agree with Kendra- I love that you are putting Macy in the forefront. They should use her more- Macy's character is hilarious. anyway- have I mentioned that I love reading this? I'm not typically a fan of AU's (I blame HPffs) but I really love this- gee, have I mentioned this before?

I love how Stella just freezes. Your Joella moments are great.
And of course the Kacy. It's all adorable.
From the End of Heaven
2009-11-16 . chapter 3
I didn't realize I had forgotten to review this- but I love it!
It makes me wish it was cannon- but then maybe you'd be writing the way it is now... Does that make sense?
Whatever- this was great.
I loved Macy's reaction to Joe's declaration that she's a girl. And your Joella makes me smile so much.
The Popstar vs. Rockstar. Love it.
I adored the Nick/Stella thing- I loved it when it was Macy- but imagining it as Stella was hilarious.
Oh and the Kacy of it all!
But really the boys responses to three things about Maria was great. I loved Kevins Door bell ringing 'philosophy'

I imagined your Juice king guy as a lot cuter than the guy they picked for the show. His hair was not that great.

good good stuff.
Hey-Hayley
2009-11-16 . chapter 4
Man, this just keeps getting better and better. Thanks for making my day, ;)
Sandalaris
2009-11-16 . chapter 4
I'm loving this story. You've got me thinking about how much it'd change things and how much would stay the same all the time now. I have a feeling we're going to see more of Randolf as he takes Van **'s place and poor Van is going to have to be Jonafied. (If I'm completely off, that's fine, it's just a theory.)
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