Lovely writing. :) Without a doubt, the best Sode no Shirayuki and Senbonzakura piece out on ffnet right now. I've always felt that Byakuya chose the wrong sister (nevermind the fact that Hisana, in my humble opinion, was weak and cowardly for abandoning Rukia). It nearly made me cringe when I wrote 'white. snow. nothing' to have to put in hints of Byakuya/Hisana. It makes me terribly happy to know that you didn't do what I did for the sake of a story.

As a side note, I remember your Aoshi/Misao writings from way back. I think I was a fan of you before you ever wrote a Bleach story!

Ah, it's so beautifully written :)

I love the way you've portrayed the characters & their relationships. Thanks for the good read :D

amazing!my fav is the last one

Ah, wow, this was amazing! I think my favorite was part V & VI. The imagery in VI was especially good!

Not too keen on ByaRuki, but I did like that ending line, it was very sharp. "The master had picked the wrong sister".

Beautiful job, I hope you write more SenShira!! ^^

~Téa

Whe! *pounces* I love this! I've been wanting to see such a fic - Senbonzakura and Sode no Shirayuki are just so awesome in the filler...

And the way Byakuya fights for Rukia is also...beyond awesomeness. *hearts*

Thank you once more for this wonderful ficlet! I loved it to bits! I'm faving! ^^;

I love your writing style!

This is very good, considering that we don't know much about these two swords' personalities, and yet you make them seem so canon. That's an awesome ability, one I admire and wish I have.

I have no criticism for this piece of artwork, but I do have a question. What do you mean by "an absent flinch"?

I hope you have a great day!