this was an great story...

that was very well done :D

UM... I love this!

*groan* It's a favorite episode of mine with all their adorable little moments and THIS... well... is just the icing on the proverbial cake.

Now that was hot... I am not so much a Jibbs shipper, but it makes those sexual harassment seminars seem a lot more interesting ;)

So HOT ! Keep writing, love what you write ;)

woah!

Yeah, so good! And I hope you don't mind, but you totally gave me a plot bunny of my own.

lol 'second page' :D

"I get so tickled by the looks she gives Gibbs during that bit, that after I heard that one line, I couldn't resist.' - I, on the other hand, collapse laughing (if I'm not lying on the carpet in front of the TV already) each time Team Gibbs sabotages the seminar lady's presentation so ably in that episode. BTW, read the phrase "seminar lady" in the most sneering tone of voice (think Severus Snape under the influence of very old firewhisky) possible, as that is the tone of voice I wrote it in, OK?
"and he heard her helping herself to a makeshift glass of bourbon, recognized the sounds of nails and bolts tumbling out of one of his mason jars." - What came in those mason jars originally, do you think?
"unable to believe she’d actually been serious when she told that uptight instructor she’d take detailed notes." - Uptight instructor, seminar lady, po-tay-to, po-tah-to.
"Muttering under his breath, Jethro wrenched open the file and started scanning the page, fully intending to memorize a sentence, claim he’d read it, thrust it back at her, and be done with it if it would make her happy. That is, until a few of Jenny’s neatly scripted words caught his eye and he focused on what he was reading.Then, he was pretty sure he forgot how to breathe. He wasn’t expecting such…detailed notes, notes on what exactly sexual harassment was, what it consisted of, and how it was performed." - Hehehe.

Oh my God!!
This is so good...the funny thing is, I was just thinking of writing the same thing couple of days ago.
I rewatched the episode again, and I thought it was a great material for a story of this kind!!
Great!!
xD

HOT!! any chance you will write one for the "second page"?

nice! i figured they were both thinking... inappropriate thoughts during that opening scene. add to that ziva's blatant messing with tony, abby being so very abby, and palmer being creepily funny, and it's probably one of my favorite scenes. this tag is a fantastic match to it. ;)

Oh I can totally live with this compromise. WOw. I love it!

I loved this story:)Great job!