I really loved this story. The writing was great as well! Clearly a great one-shot!

I would have loved the length a little bit longer, but this is really good. The best scene is the dance scene, very sad and touching.

Great work! I faved and watched you, so be warned I'll be reading anything new from you!

:)

I liked it! It was short, and maybe I would have lengthened it, but its a really nice story. It inspires my own FF6 fic actually, I never thought to have a tangled web of feelings between Edgar Locke and Terra, butit makes sense she would fall for Locke

Ah, how cute...and sad lol

It was a little too short for me, but it was great either way. I'm glad you took your time to write this ;)

Thank you ^^

It is so sweet, I love it ^^

Damn, poor Edgar! He's got it bad! I can't believe he would go and take a shot so stupid like that! Glad that it worked out for him though.

This was written well, and it was very sweet. Thank you for the good read, girl!

Ah, how cute!

It was really good for your first one shot, Magitek, I enjoyed it! My favorite scene was when he was dancing with her, very sweet. It made me feel sad when he was talking about his pain, how sad :(

Good job, Magitek, I really can't wait to see anything else from you!
(When will your Naruto fanfiction be out? I wanna read that too!)

Hm, good story. I was hoping it wouldn't be a one shot, but it ended being one lol

You kept it short and sweet, but the dance didn't really seem Halloween-ish. But, I guess back in their time they really wouldn't do what we do now.

The part when Edgar is talking with Terra in disguise is really good. I like how he explains you can't love without pain.

~"Because...without pain, you can't love."' he answered, taking his mask off. Terra gasped when she saw Edgar's face.~

That was a great touch. Edgar's suffering and pain only made him understand Terra more, and that's what makes a good story. I like your first one shot, its fantastic!

Well, good luck on any other projects you're working on and thank you for making this!